Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Wednesday Finish the Story

HI everyone! Hope your week is going well, here is my flash fiction. I have decided on doing the Monday finish the story but post it on Wednesday. That way I have all of Tuesday to write it up plus, I have my poem on Mondays so I wanted to have a even schedule to post. I have exciting news and it will be revealing in my next post! Enjoy the Flash Fiction!

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Ruins - © 2015, Barbara W. Beacham

“Where did they go?” I asked Hope, my best friend, as I saw my little sis and her so called "boyfriend" running towards the giant rock. The rock was red and seemed to have a tunnel system that seemed to be two stories high.

"I have no idea." She said shrugging and shaking her head.

"Maybe we should silently follow them to find out?" I asked nodding my head in their general direction. Hope just shrugged and followed my lead. So we tip toed through the field. Staying far enough that they would not notice us. Then they went into one of the cave entrance. Hope and I waited a minute before following in after them. That is when I heard giggling. My heart was racing. Then I stopped suddenly. My arm raised to stop Hope. My eyes widen in shock.

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING TO MY SISTER!"
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9 comments:

  1. bethfinkeAugust 12, 2015 at 6:32 AM

    Quick suggestion about your note: Look up what the word "reviled" means. I don't think that is what you meant!

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    kaitlynfranzone posted: "HI everyone! Hope your week is going well, here is my flash fiction. I have decided on doing the Monday finish the story but post it on Wednesday. That way I have all of Tuesday to write it up plus, I have my poem on Mondays so I wanted to have a even sch"

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  2. kaitlynfranzoneAugust 12, 2015 at 6:38 AM

    i meant reveal. thank you i will change that now.

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  3. Priceless JoyAugust 12, 2015 at 6:54 AM

    Great story! Leaves my imagination wide open. LOL! Loved it. I have a quick suggestion. In the first paragraph, I think that should read, tunnel system. (Little typo).

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  4. kaitlynfranzoneAugust 12, 2015 at 6:57 AM

    thank you I will fix that.

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  5. babso2youAugust 12, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    Caught in the act! Love the story Kaitlyn! Thank you for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and I hope that you join in for the next one too! Be well... ^..^

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  6. kaitlynfranzoneAugust 12, 2015 at 11:04 AM

    Yep can not wait for next weeks topic.

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  7. Kay MorrisAugust 12, 2015 at 5:40 PM

    I am intrigued!

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  8. kaitlynfranzoneAugust 12, 2015 at 5:43 PM

    Thank you.

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  9. Lata SunilAugust 12, 2015 at 9:37 PM

    Caught out! I would have expected that… but thankfully, she is giggling.

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